I felt that my essay needed a lot more work. My idea in my opinion was strong; however, I didn't convey my point clear enough probably due to vagueness. I think my biggest downfall has to be that I didn't follow the assignment as well as I intended. I should have answered the prompt and not twist it to make my idea work. Next time I will follow the prompt and I will be more clear on what I am trying to prove in my thesis.
I'll also work on choosing shorter quotes and expanding on my ideas.
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